Monday, July 18, 2005

::SpitFire::

There he stood, so motionless as to almost be one among the many stone gargoyles that adorned the balustrade … his vestments naught but tattered rags flapping in the sweeping gusts of wind. His features wreathed in the shadows of his hooded cloak.
The vision of his stature high above ground would have been quite chilling to any other being. But I knew him … knew him just too well, to be intimidated.
I stood back in my invisibility watching him. I knew he could sense my presence … He is one who sees through the air's density.
The druids below were taunting him … sneering at him … they are ever so arrogant of their measly powers.
And then .. it was as though one of the gargoyles had broken its taut position; He lashed out his blade almost ripping his cloak revealing his sleek personage.
The menacing move had already sent chills though the spines of the druids, whose destiny, as had already been determined the moment they had SpitFire crossing their paths … I sure could smell their fear. Pathetic arrogant fools, why even stand there.
One swift move and his self-projectile moved downward with his twin blade spread backwards, seething and waiting to lash out.
He landed right in the middle of the Druids' Circle.
He swung forward raising his blades above in an elegant trance-like move... like a swan.
His blade then uttered a low hum.
It seemed like silence … but it was a tearing silence … very uncanny.
With both his wrists stuck together, he rotated his blades in a circular pattern.
Keeping the rotation in procedure, he raised his hands and danced gracefully … smooth … extremely smooth.
His blade's hum, due to the movement seemed like a howl... No, I then felt it. It was a deep song ... You could feel the winds sing the song of eternity. And it seemed to emanate from deep within … as though the song vibrated right from your gut … as though your body was singing it … Grrr! I knew later what it was … his blade was inciting the fears within, into a song … no a trance.
He had more class than I could have imagined him to have.
Rotating Blades and impatient druids, just the perfect concoction for a blood bath. Somewhere someone flinched in the circle. Suddenly the music turned into one monotonous vibrating tone and he pranced like a drunk in his trance with the blades' still in smooth and perfect rotation. The rotation circle suddenly became wider than it initially was. The sudden surprise was not only to the Druids on the outer circle but also to those on the inside, whom the blade had already passed.
He spread his hands; no more stuck at the wrists, hence the wide circle of rotation.
The first set of druids fell to the floor not even feeling the pain. Impressive, I thought to myself.
The rotation circle was still wide. His dance became more coordinated ... Like some old tribal dance ... Body and Blade rotating at an inclined angle … With those menacing moves ... he lunged forward to every victim, before the first three fell down one more Druid had already tasted his blade. The druids started to pull out their staves and stilettos. But before they could even position themselves, they were already on the floor uttering silent cries.
The way he put fear was an ecstasy to watch … really relishing the way he instilled fear. His victims had such deep fear but his dance and the song of his sword seemed to put them into a trance that they were almost enjoying, but with fear still tearing them apart. This was exactly like an Arachnid that stings its prey putting them into a drunken stupor.
Though the prey knows it is helpless and knows it is going to be devoured anytime, it still enjoys the trance of the drunkenness… sort of a Sweet death.
By the time the song was over, there was none left standing in the Amphitheater. Even still his dance continued, as though to sneer at the no completion offered to him and prompting over the fact that his enemies had fallen much before his song was over.
He danced a bit more now as though to enjoy his minor victory, facing the ground.
He really had some class. I am beginning to relish him more… him and his impeccable style.
When the song ended, he was already above the balustrade again in less than a split second, as though he hadn’t budged from his initial position from before … even too fast for me to have noticed... well almost. His robe was back on him. This time he wasn’t looking at the druids or their dead bodies.
He was looking at me… directly into my eyes, just for a split second, which seemed like an hour. Weird he got my eyes even though I was invisible.
I dare say he smiled at me, as though I had said "Good Show boy". One more of his swift stylish back flip move and he was lost from my vicinity. There was something about him I couldn’t comprehend. I could not sense him anymore. He was much more powerful than I had imagined.
He had mastered his style and art more than, one could imagine.
SpitFire, I will be seeing you soon, no doubted in battle next. But where will you be, beside me or before me?
One way or the other...
The battle is going to be one hell of a display of Gargantuan Rage. I am looking forward to it.

May the fog clear and so will the future!


~ GhostStalker

29 Comments:

Blogger Kaushik said...

Nice. Is that all or is this going to continue? I like to read this sort of stuff. Hope to see you post more on the blog... why don't you have a profile? If you do, it isn't being displayed.

Kaushik

3:58 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

helloo..


I haven't read the whole thing yet... it's late, but i love what i've read.. so i'll read the whole thing and then comment...

and yeah!! why do u like sounding all ghosty ghosty

..even i dnt know what that means..!

gnite

10:44 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

i forgot!

thanx for visiting my blog too..!!

10:48 AM  
Blogger Third Eye Closed said...

Hee hee,
thank you guys.
um.. there's a part of me that wants to punish people who are atrocious, kina a rage piles on me, when i see ppl like that.
for instance ppl who exploit children, abuse animals .. etc.

I like to stalk them down and let thier own fear kill them. Hence ~GhostSTalker.

then again i am a very happy person, love to live life to the max. :)

~GhostSTalker~FeRa~

4:17 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

bravo!!!

I'v finally read the whole thing... it's superbly written.. thank God it's only evening or u'd have had me scared.. :D

will await ur next post..!
until then,
enjoy my soap opera ( by the by that was a one off post),
adieu!

4:20 AM  
Blogger Third Eye Closed said...

~GhostSTalker~
hee hee,
if that was scarey preetika .. wait for the other episodes :P
lol,

~GhostSTalker~FeRa~
o.0~@!

4:31 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

..naw i jst said that to make u feell better...

*tongue showing smilie*

8:19 AM  
Blogger Third Eye Closed said...

~GhostSTalker~
hee hee
tyty,
You are so sweet.
:)
The more ppl comments i have .. the more i can be confirmed to continue with the work..
then i can post the other parts :P

GL to ya all and thanx for chking out my blog 0:)

~GhostSTalker~FeRa~
o.0~@!

10:25 PM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

u have go to post the "u are sweet" part on my blog... no one believes it! pah!

:D

...by the by,it wasn't a hardship... reading your post,ok? ..So, plleej put up what happens next FAST!

1:31 AM  
Blogger Kaushik said...

GhostStalker/Fera&Karna/whatever,

Don't count your comments without looking at them, because only two people have really commented on the post... preetika and me. I'm waiting for the next instalment. I was quite disappointed when I saw "9 comments" under the post and it ended up being a dialogue betwen you and preetika.

Kaushik

10:09 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

~continuation will come in a day or so..
:P

~GhostSTalker

2:44 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

sheesh kaushik...

not everyone is as fast as u ... and dnt be mean,,!!

5:10 AM  
Blogger Kaushik said...

I'm not being mean, pk... I was just saying that maybe you ought to comment a little less on the same post over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again.

Kaushik

3:19 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

why ever shud i stop???

6:07 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

tough luck buster.... 'cuz by the by your gonna hear it anyway..over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again.

8:05 AM  
Blogger Kaushik said...

Ghoststalker,

I apologise on Preetika's behalf for the way she behaves on your blog, on blogs in general, in public, and in private.

Oh, and if I have caused you any irritation, I assure you that it is all preetika's fault. Again I apologise for that on her behalf.

Kaushik

6:52 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

thanks kaushik

and sorry ghost stalker

10:36 AM  
Blogger Third Eye Closed said...

lol,
guys chill out!

Blogs are meant to be run over, sanity or not.. we all wanna have a lil' peice of joy.. and u 2 ..just seem to have added that Extra Pepproni and Extra Cheeze ... Love it :)

~GhostSTalker~

10:24 PM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

na... jst accept the apology kaushik found necessary to deliver on my behalf for my seemingly attrocious behavior... on this blog and every other blog, and in general too...!

5:29 AM  
Blogger Kaushik said...

PK... add "in public and in private"..

And Ghoststalker... how long will we have to wait for the next part??

Kaushik

4:33 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

sheesh THANKS...

YEAH... where is the next post?? and why do u need a "campaign manager"?? i mean wat do U DO??

9:18 AM  
Blogger Kaushik said...

He posts on his blog on a highly infrequent basis (although I think we will need at least one more post to determine factors like frequency and stuff). Maybe Ghoststalker has some great big plans for this blog, and they are still in formation. Campaign Manager is part of this plan. Once this plan is complete, we shall see it being executed, and this blog shall astonish and fascinate those who chance upon it.

Kaushik

5:40 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

Dearest Kaushik,

Your being mean again!!!

Dearest Ghost stalker,

Please do post something soon and visit us mortals on planet earth.

Loads of love,
Preetika

12:26 AM  
Blogger Kaushik said...

Why is nothing happening here?

Kaushik

8:37 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

: )

1:24 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

knock knock

yooooohhhooooo

anybody home??

9:32 AM  
Blogger sharanya said...

oh my god... that was...BRILLIANT. MORE MORE! ENCORE ALREADY!

9:04 AM  
Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

this guys is trying to "Act dead" sharanya... we've been asking him to continue writing for AGES.. but he just won't LISTEN!!!

pah

9:10 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hmm...

I see a lot of talk going on here.. The ghost stalker part is an amazing concept.. The two blades show how he is at rest with the way of nature.. He knows that there are two forces that are opposite to each other in every way.. i am not saying that one is good and the other evil.. but i am trying to tell u the blades symbolise to me something about nature.. It tells me of how it is the way u have lived.. and not the way u die that matters.. The way ghost stalker puts the mercenary's life at peace with the sword of light and the rest dont face a fate more genile.. Keep it up.. and please do complete this..

Looking forward to it

UnHoLy a.k.a Soldier From Hell

11:06 PM  

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